All Comments on 'A Women's World'

This reads like it was written by a 12-year-old virgin.

It really does sound like it was written by a virgin. My cousin who is 13 has written more interesting things on the inside of a bathroom stall.

Garbage.

That was crappy.

Wow thanks for the destructive feedback and for the record I am not a 12 year old virgin fuckers

MzTastee, unless you're a teenage boy, you'll know that it's the build up to the sex that's the most important. That way, when the sex comes, you're hot and horny as hell. If you ever decide to write another story, and I pray to God that you don't, try using a plot, characterisation, build it up slowly, and run it past someone who's vaguely literate (for editing out the many mistakes) before you post it online.

That was just awful.

That was not good to fast we want some four play lol take YOURRRRR time play in the pussy slow

Darling that wasn't the best , but I see great potential. Keep it going !

Lol wow those comments had me rolling but sweetie u have excellent potential take it slow next time so it'll build the moment great plot by the way women rule ha I've thought about that for years the world on reverse thanks for planting the seed of sweet now make it grow to awesome try n try again... byee

If there is no continuum, the title of the story is stupid.