by Abdelkaoolomocro
Thank you anymous one, glad you like it, thank you anonymous two for your comment.
Good start. I never understand why people can not be more constructive when they say they don't like something so you can take it on board. It would help to understand the critic. Good luck with the writing.
Thank you, I did not get it either, why say that? But never mind. Thank you for your kind words, next chapter is going to be Abdels’ POV.
A nice start, looking forward to seeing how they progress. I like that they whole group jumped rite in on it, a nice twist from what I expected halfway though.