All Comments on 'Above and Beyond'

by RaulBloodworth

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Sk8erboi89Sk8erboi89almost 4 years ago
Hawt

This was really hot, had me turned on!

FitGuy47FitGuy47almost 4 years ago

I was right there, right next to Matt. and as hard as Matt And I'm sure there are plenty more Dare's from both, since there VERY close friends Now.

FitGuy47FitGuy47almost 4 years ago

I DARE YOU TO GIVE US SOME MORE!!!! hehe

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 4 years ago

That was so hot, the only thing that I would want to do different would be to swallow his cum or at least lick all the cum off of him. It would be great to have a friend that would let me suck his cock on a regular basis.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More!

Please continue.

I dare you!🤭

DelsetDelsetalmost 3 years ago

god i love how you transitioned from the perspective of questioning, to a fragment moment assured, to the full on world beyond the moment. as a reader, placing myself in first person perspective naturally, feeling that moment of 'couldi, shouldi, ... fuckit

... that next aspect of *omfg*

feeling what you wrote was like eating a doughnut and finding a spot of glaze that wasn't intended.

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