by RaulBloodworth
I was right there, right next to Matt. and as hard as Matt And I'm sure there are plenty more Dare's from both, since there VERY close friends Now.
That was so hot, the only thing that I would want to do different would be to swallow his cum or at least lick all the cum off of him. It would be great to have a friend that would let me suck his cock on a regular basis.
god i love how you transitioned from the perspective of questioning, to a fragment moment assured, to the full on world beyond the moment. as a reader, placing myself in first person perspective naturally, feeling that moment of 'couldi, shouldi, ... fuckit
... that next aspect of *omfg*
feeling what you wrote was like eating a doughnut and finding a spot of glaze that wasn't intended.