by MSTarot
Some times you are very good. At times like this, you are barely mediocre.
It would seem that a few people are having trouble recognizing a ghost story when they read it. Halloween at midnight in New Orleans when the wall between worlds is at it's weakest. Seems there was a breakthrough!!
I enjoyed your story very much. The setting was minimal but well drawn and the characterization was very effective. There were a few distracting editing mistakes but what was there was so well wrought that I still gave it a five. Thanks for an enjoyable story.
"I leaned in and placed a kiss atop her moving fingers, letting my lips stay there against the warm, damp, pink silk fabric."
Strange story. Sexy and strange.
I can honestly say that this story confused the fucking hell out of me but non the less a good read, just wish we could know what happens.
Very nicely written and you sound so very intelligent in your word use.
What a relief after reading stories in which the author (M/F) wasn't even aware they needed a proofreader but blithely wrote threw where they meant through. Not to mention 'fares fare'
I look forward to reading more of your stories. Hope you'll write something longer and sell it. I'd gladly pay for the privilege of reading a novella if it's this quality.
I love a story that makes me work for it. This piece twists and turns and slips between dimensions deliciously. Even though absinthe has been on my list of must-try's for a while this adds some seriously sexy undertones to said desire.
Thank you for taking us on this mind bending adventure and please, please, Please... don't stop!