All Comments on 'Absinthe Dreams'

by MSTarot

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Frustrating

Some times you are very good. At times like this, you are barely mediocre.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Uh

That was good--I think.

warspitewarspiteover 8 years ago
Ghost story

It would seem that a few people are having trouble recognizing a ghost story when they read it. Halloween at midnight in New Orleans when the wall between worlds is at it's weakest. Seems there was a breakthrough!!

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 8 years ago
Lovely

I enjoyed your story very much. The setting was minimal but well drawn and the characterization was very effective. There were a few distracting editing mistakes but what was there was so well wrought that I still gave it a five. Thanks for an enjoyable story.

patientleepatientleeover 8 years ago
My favorite part-

"I leaned in and placed a kiss atop her moving fingers, letting my lips stay there against the warm, damp, pink silk fabric."

Strange story. Sexy and strange.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good start

Ahhh. It was getting good any more?

theysaidineedaprofilenametheysaidineedaprofilenameover 8 years ago

I can honestly say that this story confused the fucking hell out of me but non the less a good read, just wish we could know what happens.

I_of_HorusI_of_Horusover 6 years ago
Wow!

Very nicely written and you sound so very intelligent in your word use.

What a relief after reading stories in which the author (M/F) wasn't even aware they needed a proofreader but blithely wrote threw where they meant through. Not to mention 'fares fare'

I look forward to reading more of your stories. Hope you'll write something longer and sell it. I'd gladly pay for the privilege of reading a novella if it's this quality.

WinterDragonWinterDragonabout 5 years ago
Excellent

What a wonderful Hallows Eve story!

I enjoyed it very much.

XlornXXlornXalmost 4 years ago

I love a story that makes me work for it. This piece twists and turns and slips between dimensions deliciously. Even though absinthe has been on my list of must-try's for a while this adds some seriously sexy undertones to said desire.

Thank you for taking us on this mind bending adventure and please, please, Please... don't stop!

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