All Comments on 'Abstinence'

Very good, well said. You used the correct adjectives, and did not over do their use. Drew me right into the story.

Actually, I thought that "Abstinence makes the hard on longer"...? Well done. Thank you.

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I can't comment on the writing. But, from what I read it's a story about a woman using her sexual power to prove to herself that her old boyfriend couldn't withstand her charm. Very ego gratifying, for women. Less so for men. As a guy, I would translate this into how some old girlfriend simply had to be with me, because I had a lot of money, or maybe I'd become a big celebrity, so that I could almost always get my way. Not my cup of tea.

Sounds like he would have a good case for crying rape. She coerced him into giving in. No means No whether male or female.

@Stii: I'm a firm believer in "no means no," but he didn't exactly act like it was against his will. Plus, he's the one that took "the final plunge"... doesn't sound like rape to me.

It's obviously not rape since he gave in completely. He was the one to take the final thrust into her which if anything isn't rape. And to other Anonymous you'd make it so that it seemed she was a girlfriend coming after you for your money and power? Well that's just sad you'd need to invent that lie, when it takes a real man to even own up to it. As for the story, it was extremely hot and had the right balance of witty banter along with him trying to get away but not being able too because she was charming. Well written. Write more!