All Comments on 'Accidental Exhibitionism Pt. 01'

by Longshlongsilver

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10towers10towersalmost 6 years ago
Congratulations on your first literary work.

I didn't mind at all you leaving out details of the protagonist. Often a man or woman is described as unusually well endowed. Why does a woman need DD boobs to be in a story? Likewise a man's bodily parts don't need to be gargantuan, I will watch for chapter 2.

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 6 years ago
Welcome

I always love how the 'accidental' exhibitionists become 'purposeful' exhibitionists. Have fun with your character.

Zoo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Story !!!

Enjoyed reading it :-)

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