All Comments on 'Accidents Will Happen Ch. 02'

Thank you for writing such a sweet and loving story. It is a very good love story, along with a hot and erotic sex / incest story.

I was hoping that the two of them would be together for the rest of their lives, but the ending made perfect sense and everyone was happy.

Thanks for the very good read

You were telling a good story and fucked it up they were to stay with each other not dating other men and women and you did not any thing were he was eating her pussy and licking her ass hole and sticking in her ass

no where as good as the first, it was rushed and there didn't seem to be any real love between them then you killed it with them going with other people. what's the point of having sex with a relative if you are going to move on to others? that is a good way to ruin a relationship for ever, it would have been much better if they stayed together way to easy for it to drive them apart. with incest it is usually better to either continue as a couple or never start at all.

still very very odd and strange

she goes from not really being interested in having sex with him to being in love with him and wanting him to fuck her,and visa versa in his case

then they finally do the deed(which by the way mom and dad are cool about Really!!!!!!!!!) and next thing they're dating other people WTF

i think the premise of the story was great,it was just let down by inconsistencies and by it being unbelievably unrealistic in most parts

Thanks for the comments, as I said in my comment on Part one, I don't think there is any thing else I can add to this story, so this will go no further.

HS

It seems the adverse comments from your first part has rattled you a bit and cramped your writing style for the second part . Don't let the comments get to you ! Grow and learn from them . Well Done .

I agree with the previous comment. There are some minor issues with the story, but in all you told a good one and it was your story. So you did not please some who had their specific wants, I and apparently others enjoyed the story. The biggest complaint from some seems to be that the relationship was not a love of their lives ending. Instead you have siblings whose love for each other did go to the next level, and I am happy with that variant of the brother sister incest story as it was well told.

Why couldn't they stay together after all they had their parents blessing wasteful ending.