All Comments on 'Across the Alley'

Your edgy, almost noir style sure has the desired effect on this reader. Please continue writing and posting more chapters or anything else you desire for that matter. Just make soon and let your inner slut soar!

5 stars;)

I really loved this story, only thing I disliked was the 'master', he was kind of a big creep and it sounds like he's a sociopath. That being said, I loved Melody's character and her orgasms! Hope you'll do another chapter.