All Comments on 'Across the Divide'

I loved how you drew out the sibling interaction. I'm hoping for a second part where bro and sis will finally take the plunge, so to speak. Great story, easily 5 star material.

SoB

Awesome shit.

The inclusion of Angel really works well. Nice, erotic interlude. Thanks.

The "I... I... I.." crap got annoying after the second one. Try saying that out loud. Now try saying that out loud every time you got flustered. -.-

I hope there's a part 2 with them going to water hole. It was great tease between brother and sister, I would love to see them go all the way.

Love the story! More please!!!!!!!!

I think this is very familiar to something else I have read.

Keep going. Second chapter, please....

Oh please Tex, you have to tell us about the camping trip! Hot as hell story, 5+ Stars!

I agree...hot, hot, hot!!! All comments lead me to believe you should write about the camping trip AND the day after that and after that and after that!!!!

5 of them thar slurpy stars

Writing at least one more chapter so he can fuck his sister and the two girls can eat each other

...but I got bored with "groaned", "moaned", and "whimpered". Couldn't finish. Sorry.

Great story! One of the best in a long time. Keep it going what happens when they get home? Crystal sneaks into Chris' room sits on his face again?

Will you continue this story?

Nice funny little tail, er I mean tale.

Why, Tx , Is there no part two! This story is so hot! Five stars and favorited!

..., a Part 2 would be most welcome.

As would a Part 3, and 4, and ... .

I found my way back to this story, again, and enjoyed it just as much as the first two times. Or 3, or ... .

Well it made it into my Favorites right after I actually signed up on Lit, and a good story is a good story!

Only a couple complaints, no continuation (yet), and I can't vote on it again.

I'd be giving it another 5 Stars. You betcha!

Love the story! Great telling. Hoping for a second part too.

Too many misspelled words to keep up with.

Having them both names that can be shortened to the thing is a clumsy choice.

As usual, the author leaves us hanging....

I'm very disappointed that Crystal didn't go all the way with her brother. 3/5

Anonymous about 1 year ago...correct!!! Please finish your stories...

I agree with the other comments. I do not like stories that need more to it and has an ending. This story just stops and it was going really well. Since you wrote it so long ago, I doubt you will finish it.

Your characters groan and stammer waaaaayyyy too much.

A great mixture of incest and friends with benefits. Also a good mix of virgins and eagerness to explore. Glad a good time was had by all. It's a shame there isn't a follow up to this tale.