All Comments on 'Across the Way'

A lovely piece. Thank you.

Great sex and great story together. Loved it.

Thank you very much for your feedback! I greatly appreciate it.

The story can also be downloaded as a free ebook at Smashwords (https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/145120) and GoodReads (http://www.goodreads.com/reader/20274-across-the-way?return_to=%2Fbook%2Fshow%2F13560921-across-the-way) as well!

--LZ

www.luxzakari.com

Enjoyed your story. More please. :-)

Great writing. You've made your characters very real, very believable, very sweet and very hot! And there's a very real passion in the sex. More please!

please continue this story line. I must hear more of there future lives. please write more.

more than sex - really interesting development. .. And a happy ending. Enjoyed it thanks D

liked the development, good idea

With stories like this you have to continue. Thank you very much.

What a great little story and well told. Thanks.

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