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by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A bit of editing needed.

So was the girl named Trudi or Traci?? "Tell me, do you think the hero would finish up taking the girl's dress of(f), getting her naked?" Other instances also, detracting from your story.

kelknightkelknightabout 9 years ago
Very nice

Few spelling errors, but very well paced. I liked that she was pissed off and fighting back. That made the fantasy hotter for me.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 9 years ago
Well played passion play

Throughly enjoyed the undressed rehearsal . Full marks. *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What?

Her name changed

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
THERE WAS A COMMENT---

she said NO several times. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Never knew it was so sunny in England

Always w/ the sun dresses.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well done

You and my vibrator make a lovely pair.

You always deliver.

SubmissiveAudreySubmissiveAudreyabout 7 years ago
Another home run!

I have to admit this had me wet and wanting more. You are an amazing writer and I love the spanking. A nice spanking among a man his woman is always nice to fantasize about. ;)

bdsmbillbdsmbillalmost 4 years ago
Name change

A little way in, Trudi changed to Traci. Probably has multiple personality disorder.

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