by Publius68
I fully loved the humor and world building especially present in this story, fleshes everything out that much better!
I loved this chain of stories and this last one had me laughing so hard, Something I had not expected on a sad evening like today, Thank you :)
I am pausing halfway through the first page of this chapter to write that I actually laughed out loud when Scott's father threw his fishing rod to walk over and congratulate his son on his threesome! I am thoroughly enjoying your stories, both because of the “ridiculously plausible” storyline, as well as the attention to grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Looking very much forward to reading the rest of your compositions in Literotica!
The personalities are satisfying complex, the characters expand, backstorys layer up, and the sexual and dramatic tensions grow.
Root!!!
Such an amazing story! The building relationships between the protagonists have me on edge, waiting for something to go wrong. The scenes between father and son have been a welcome, loving and supportive element. A humorous moment where little can go seriously wrong. Well done.
Excellent, usually we don't get to smile while reading a story o this site. Thank you again.
The quality of your writing has certainly clicked up these past two chapters. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
When I started re-reading this chapter I was a bit surprised it was in the Humor and Satire category. Then i laughed my head off all the way through it and remembered, oh yeah, I loved this chapter!