by Publius68
This was a great ending to an awesome series. Loved the authenticity of the developments and the happy ending doesn’t disappoint. Well done
Great story - I loved the characters and the unexpected ending. Sad that the series has come to an end…
A wonderful effort.Sorry I don't usually give feedback before an ending. I hope,. how eve,r that this cast engenders another story.
Caramba!! Que história cara, sinceramente eu gostaria de um extra da história, seria interessante
Superb effort - chapters 1-12. The story, dialogue, and sex, all are as good as you find on this site. It could have used a bit more closure in my opinion, but I can accept your finality, if that's what you choose. I personally found it wanting in the ancillary topic of his parents' attitudes, especially since you incorporated the question more than once. You made his father, in particular, a most interesting character, and I would loved to have been privvy to his reactions upon meeting Meredith.
Excellent story, well written, the emotional parts--all of them, not just the sex--catch the reader. Thanks ever so much.
I'm sorry to see the stories end especially when and ever they meet the parents
I also want a sequel.. Meredith meets mom, crushes bitches at the club and freak in the caymans
Having discovered you, I'm going through your stories
Like a stoner goes through butter slathered popcorn.
This was a 7-star ride. Tantalizing and funny, engrossing and erotic. It brought back memories of sensations I experienced with my own "older woman" when I was in grad school many years ago. I look forward to more thrill rides from you.
Have read every one. You are a very talented writer! Please write more, or do you publish elsewhere?
Loved it, brilliant; I'm now going to read all your other stories. I wish I could give it 10 stars. It cries out for a sequel when Meredith is introduced to Mother!
Thank you, it also gave me the best laugh I've had for ages in the son/dad camping trip.
Congratulations- really well written.
Even with the occasional typo you failed to provide anything but ‘page turning’ fun. BRAVO
Fantastic read but why the abrupt ending? There is so much more fun you could have with this.
I really like to read your work. One of the better writers on this site. I can’t wait to read the rest of your stories.
Allergies going crazy here, let me just get this pollen out of my eye...
Like Scott I felt momentary disappointment at the end of the throuple, but it was quickly matched and exceeded by the sweetness of the resolution for all involved, particularly their mutual confessions of deep feels, where that pollen got to me ;) And the hints were there throughout that it would go this way. Nice foreshadowing!
I loved this story! It must be difficult as a writer to know when to stop. I would have loved to hear the story of the Caribbean vacation with the lawyers and introducing Meredith to mom. Well done.
such a good writer,this had the legs to go further,but i guess you have other idea's you want to get too
An absolutely brilliant series.
Had a hint of the ensuing at about ch5 but you were so subtle with the hints it was no certaintity I was on track.
The sex scenes were brilliant but equally so were the charactisations and the overall story
Ryan. From Oz
This chapter caps the story so well, Scott's rant/confession to Meredith is such a fun piece of a writing. And I always find myself with a goofy grin on my face as I read Scott and Meredith waiting for Steph on the couch.
I feel like the conflict has been resolved, so I understand the story ending, but I'd love to read a few epilogue chapters, the Grand Cayman trip, Meredith meeting mom, maybe even a wedding? More Scott and Meredith teasing Steph and Alan.
I'm here for the story more than for the sexy times though, and it might be hard to keep the sexy times fresh at this point, depends on why you write I guess.
You set it up for so many more. Reveals of their love. But am a huge fan of happily ever after. And you did that. Who knows where you would have taken it in the Caribbean. It may have made me wish you stopped when you did. Thanks for your story still wish there was a better rating system.
Wonderful series. A good ending ( I'm always up for a happy ending ) but with lots of potential for a sequel. Again not sex, great humour and a good storyline. For anyone who thinks totally not possible, trust me real life is stranger and this will have happened somewhere. I'm just loving your writing and looking forward to more. BardnotBard.
Loved the series. In this episode, Scott sending his dad the picture of the uber-babe who just dumped him, followed by the reason he wasn't upset, was just perfect.
Thank you for sharing such an excellent story with us. I was hoping to hear more about Scott introducing Merideth to the family. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Not nearly the end. C’mon, Caribbean, meeting Dad, he’ll, meeting Mom. Could be an epic ending. Excellent as it stands.
Huh how disappointing started chapter saw it was Merideth endgame and skipped.
Loved it but I have to admit I was looking forward to the introductions to the parents.
Honestly I just found your stories recently. I gotta say, some great story lines. I have already read all of " Guilty Pleasures", "A Reputation", "Alistaire", "Alistaire too", and "Car Wash". I see that you took some time off, hope to see more of your work!!
Heh.. so you’re pretty good at this: “leave them wanting more…..”. Aren’t ya? 😂
Really disliked the ending, felt that Steph should have been his true love, but only my opinion.
Loved this story series! So glad Scott ended up with Meredith. They were a better match from the get go. Hope you will pick it back up later and write about their lives continuing together.
Thank you again for the great read!