All Comments on 'Adam and Eve: The Beginning'
by coollvr1
- 11 Comments
estragonover 13 years agoYou answered the question many have asked: who invented fucking. Really funny.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis could be really good if you drop the attempt at part-time old english. Would you consider re-posting, write it straight and let the content carry the humor?
blackstallion21over 13 years agoAlthough I normally think of things like this as "Sacrilegious," I laughed quite a bit... But unfortunately, I would have to agree with "Anonymous," the old english or "King James" writing style kills certain parts of the story!
Other than that, GREAT READ! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Anonymousover 13 years agoIt was great up to the George Bush thing...
I was going to give it a 4 but it got a 1...
Anonymousover 13 years agoI gave it a five to cancel out yon GOP fucktard below with his tampon in a knot over a two-second satirical slight paid to his imaginary ex-presidential boyfriend.
Anonymousover 13 years agoLoved the olde English, hated the Satan/Eve thingy
William smythover 13 years agoI loved he story line of the original posting but felt that the use of the "Old English" dialog was a detraction. Now we have it in plain old modern English and it is a gem--a classic of satirical pornography. I wish I could give it an even higher vote than than the system allows.
My congratulations to the author.
tazz317almost 12 years agoand has carried down since that fateful day. TK U MLJ LV NV
tazz317almost 12 years agoleaves openings for a new thought to religion. Just think there were 3 people, a cast of animals and nngels and those 3 were all there was, but the 2 males fell out and the 1 female went with one of them. That story came down thru eternity till today. But like todays struggles between nations or teams life must and still goes on. TK U MLJ LV NV
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