All Comments on 'Adam's Little Sister Ch. 02'

You had a good story until you decided to add another male later on. Totaly lost my interest...

Oh yes. Very nice. I can hardly wait for the next part.

Great. Not certain where the story is going bgut it looks good

"I hopped into my Miata convertible ..." What a pussy! The Miata was a teeenaged girls dream car, not for a guy.

I wish I could give it a higher scoring. Amazing story. it truely is one of my favorites

You say that the Miata is a teen girl's dream car. Have you ever driven one? I'll bet that your dream car is a minivan.

Thanks for your good work.

It's a good story and I love it. But they have to be drunk to fuck.

You got my juices flowing. Love it!

In the first chapter she was not dating because of her lisp. I assumed she was not SEXUALLY ACTIVE.

I still have the HOTTS FOR.

Now she is more of a sexual goddess.

Not she wants a threesome with her brothers BEST FRIEND.

I still enjoy the story I just look at her differently.

KEEP FUCKING SWEET SUSAN

Of course I will comment on your story...at least this one (Chapter 2)...

You have written a hot story...I love the plot; Susan & Adam are so erotic ❤ together...but I am NOT liking the MMF angle, at least not this early in the relationship...

I know the chapters are written, & you show recent updating; could still use another proofread to iron out the issues with grammar...but still, a most imaginative start!!

Five Stars!!

Oh, yeah, went to start Chapter 3, and remembered another comment for this one...

Adam & Susan don't ALWAYS have to imbibe before they have fun, do they??

Again, I know the story is written...still, it would be nice for their emotions to be pure & from the heart, without inebriation involvement...

Again, strong story...back to Chapter 3 now!!