All Comments on 'Adult Situations Ch. 07-08'

by SteveWallace

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pwdinblewpwdinblewabout 2 years ago

I liked the initial premise, but sadly there's little character development: they're just nice people who have more sex in an evening than I get in a week. Bland.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The difficult thing about Harem/Group stories is the balance between character development and adding new characters. There is no point in bringing in dozens of characters and having to switch between so many.

I hope the writer keeps his focus on the main chars and their story.

Cuthbert125Cuthbert125about 2 years ago

I’ve liked and followed this series. For some reason the next installment is showing up on my favorites page but there’s a 404 error when I click the link and that installment doesn’t show up on your stories page. Curious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would have like to have the air tight segment expanded on.

01JETMECH01JETMECHover 1 year ago

Really enjoy this series, I hope it doesn’t get confusing and loose the “heat” of the many moments

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

My momma always said "share and share alike", this sounds like the adult extension to that philosophy! This story just keeps giving and giving, hard-ons that is, lol. I appreciate and applaud your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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A note on Porn Star next door. I keep getting kickbacks from Literotica without knowing why. Persevere: I will edit chapter by chapter until they deem it acceptable to publish. It just won't be as good. A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A ...

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