All Comments on 'Adult Situations Ch. 19-20'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So - we started out with a nice Dave/Crystal romance story, but in 20 chapters we have 30 characters that the mains are having sex with, and they have turned into porn stars. I was kind of afraid this would happen. All good fun but not my kind of thing. This is the point where I stop reading.

lion04lion04about 2 years ago

At this point, I am stoping reading it because I am so confusing with too many characters have to put it on my brain. But, if you are smart enough, then it is fun to read.

WoodencavWoodencavabout 1 month ago

It is getting very confusing, would have been better with less characters and more focus on the interaction between the chapters, particularly more descriptive sex, but I am still enjoying it and will keep reading, I want to see where it goes. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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A note on Porn Star next door. I keep getting kickbacks from Literotica without knowing why. Persevere: I will edit chapter by chapter until they deem it acceptable to publish. It just won't be as good. A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A ...

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