by GeorgeTasker
Erotic and at the same time makes want to keep reading on to find out how the 'heroes' and heroine fares.
I come back to this series again and again. Love your writing!
Just brain shit with NO writing skills in sight ! Fucking Pommy faggots !!!
to offset the biggest asshole on LIT, dear annony. HIs blood dumb comments just shows how fucked up in the head this old ugly fat gay cock sucker is.
This psychotic degenerate should be banned from Lit !!
For ever !
Unfortunately the last Chapter 3 is rather disappointing. Why would Cockweasel let an Orc fuck his Paladin maiden, why would he share her without need and let the Orc boss him around?
The Paladin was only very reluctantly giving Cockweasel a bj, because he insisted very much and suddenly she lets the obese Orc and Cockweasel fuck her like a nasty slut. This mmf threesome was a bad story decission in my opinion and also made not much sense characterwise. This threesome was an abrupt change and not even hot.
The previous chapters were far better than this Chapter 3.