by Many Feathers
..believable. What more could you ask
This story is a fantasy of mine,,, It was well written... enough for me to picture what was going on... It was great... ty for your story... Larry
this story got me to the point of no return... its a real fantasy of mine... ty... Larry
I've been involved with Literotica as a reader and a writer for four years now, so I've seen just about everything, good, bad and ugly.
So it's real delight to read a story that is truly original, with a unique concept that is fully realized. Not to mention that it's hot as hell.
It's also very well written, without any glaring errors, the story flows well and keeps the reader's interest. I also liked the ironic tone. You don't take yourself too seriously, and that's a good thing.
Congrats on an very good job.
OMG- That was one of THE finest stories ever. I've read tons of stuff on Lit and this one ranks in the top 5. I can just imagine my wife and I with our friends and I REALLY CAN imagine it, but after this ultra hot story then WOW. So damn believable. LUV it and can't WAIT for the follow up to this great story. Many thanks ..Tim
This is one of the best stories loved it cause it takes time getting there!
woe loved this story there has to be another part when can i see that
Just read your story and it is really good. I can just about see that mutual masturbation scene. My wife and I do that quite often and it is extremely exciting for both of us.
Gave it a five. But it was actually a 5-. I'm into watching women masturbate, but I guess not stories about it. Used to live in a duplex when first married. Another young cpl lived next door. Our wives got us to videoing ourselves masturbating and fucking and then trading with the neighbors. This was VHS, '80's. Never saw each other naked in person. And the good thing was (thouh we didn't realize it till later) that back then there was no Facebook worry. That one of us would get drunk or high and do something stupid on the computer. Personal Computers at that time used MS DOS and 51/2" floppy drives. But this story was fun.
I absolutely love mutual masturbation. Wife n I do it all the time...would love something like this as would she. Good job
Couldn't See The Reason When Rachel's Old Man
Didn't Jump On Cindy's Body And Fuck The
Living Shit Out Of Her
Loved the story, I would love to have that happen. Realistically, however, that will happen shortly after our sun turns into a cold, dead, cinder!
Oh well, until then I’ll look for more of YOUR stories. Please keep writing!
Would love to hear (well, read ....) how the joint session went!
Very sexy and beautifully written. There's something about the sheer joy of appreciating one's own joy and that of somebody else. A tonic for a prudish world.