All Comments on 'After Hours Ch. 02'

....you write over-the-top sexual fantasies that are for puerile minds. Calling this for adults is like calling Casey Anthony a good parent. I'm writing this because I am at war with authors that put stupid teen crap like this on a site that claims to be for literature. Of course you'll delete it but maybe someone will see this. "Retreat?-HELL!"

But a good fun read. Thanks author.

...it's the subset of the site, not the site itself that is wrong for this. Of course incest and bdsm and all the extreme subsets have all sorts of over the top fantasies. I like to think that this one genre exists in the real world. My bad.

hey pete, go fuck yourself somewhere else then. your censorship is not really welcome on an open post website. take the tool out of your mouth long enough to breath and get some sense.

. . . type of story, but I like this one. You tell the story well with good pace and drama. Powerful boss having his way with employee's wife is certainly nothing new; wife liking the use/abuse isn't new either. Must be the way you tell the story that has me loooking for the next chapter. It could be in BDSM, but it fits here in LW as well, and I am glad it does or I probably would never have found it.

Pete wrote a few comments and I thought I’d respond. First off the intro is very limited space wise so it is mostly a teaser to get folks to read the story. Second Literotica is erotic literature i.e. stories of a sexual nature. I write these for fun, if you want great lit go buy one of the books I write for profit. As for the subset, a loving wife can be a bondage slut, help her husband’s career and enjoy multiple partners as long as it’s done with mutual consent, hence loving wifes. True, the story could have been in any number of categories. I choose this one. Dom Woolf

Hot story. Thank you Domwoolf!

In my own opinion, I was bothered by a Chapter 2. Not needed. The first story had the excitement of an unexpected encounter and very unexpected kink. This one was far more standard 'asshole dom boss gets whatever he wants'.

and I can't believe that I actually read the whole thing. I will be on the lookout for your stories in the future and pass them up quickly.

This story looks interesting...