by cnhemingway
Although it's better than nothing and the story is progressing having waited so long for it this chapter just felt too short. I have really been looking forward to this story and how you plan to bring it to a proper resolution and I hope the wait wouldn't be that long until we have another hopefully much longer next chapter.
More please...I know it’s been years; but I’m hoping you’ll come back to this. It’s a unique story & I’m wondering where it will leave.
A unique story,, very well written. Please continue -- I may have been years, but it's clearly worth it!