All Comments on 'After The Storm'

Tony,

Another great story! This one could be continued, I hope so. In some ways I wish you would write more but if that makes the quality go down, don't.

Very emotional! I love all of your work and would love to see this one contiuned as well. If that is not your wish is was touching just as written. I will just come to my own conclusions as to their future.

keep it slow and keep the writing's quality up like you've been doing so far, as opposed to churning out 25,000 half-baked "stories" every week about swallowing something or others of dozens of people weekly,,, like some others,,,

know you quality writing on subtle human qualities is quietly appreciated.

This Writer scores again with another well written story about two former High School students who hook up to run a store. After surviving a storm, they find their own growing passions help tnem to survive the Storms aftermath. An enjoyable story.

This story certainly should have been catagorized as a Romance Story.

It was so warm and loving. Thank you for your efforts.

Charleybear

I haven't yet read all your stories, but what I particularly like is your sensitive

approach when you write of people whom have had major upsets in their lives.

I realise these are fictional characters but I like your descriptions and how they

sort out problems. It is almost as if in real life you have considerable experience

in counseling.

Keep up the good work and keep writing, thankyou.

P.S. Good luck with the book.

nice

A sweet short story

Wonderful character dev & dialogue. If the erotic stories on the site had this character & dialogue quality, they would be far, far more erotic. As one well known author put it: 'its about exchange of emotions, not bodily fluids'.

It is truly a shame that an author of this caliber no longer shares his wonderful stories with Lit readers. This story like his others have such depth and compassion. Well written with great characters. 5/5

A very, very enjoyable read.