All Comments on 'Afterglow'

I like the story, as I find it extremely hot.

However, I feel like I'm missing some kind of background...

Is this the second story in a series?

I really love the twist on this one. It gives a sense of karmic justice to it all. As they say, "You can't cheat an honest man."

This story begins "in medias res", or in the middle of the action. You're intended to pick up the background through Susannah's narration as she is programmed further by Robyn.

I've read them all, and they're all great. And I love to see "in media res" to explain a porn story!

Porn is really no different from sex. It's not about size, ya gotta have technique. :)

This is sooo good what a fun twist!

Always interesting when the one determined to control becomes the one controlled. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and creative abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.