All Comments on 'Afternoon Footsie'

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Ooooo the sexual tension!!!!!

Now THIS is how you build sexual tension! Wow. Great characterization, VERY real people, this was bright, witty, a brilliant piece of work. You, mister, are now on my favorites list. So there! :P

john-the-authorjohn-the-authoralmost 18 years ago
Very realistic!

It sounds like a lot of high school encounters. Was delightfully real. Keep up the good work!

asiaprofasiaprofalmost 18 years ago
Brilliant

middle ground concept

and even more brilliant

way of illustrating it!

daythymedaythymealmost 17 years ago
Charmed

Enchanted by the touches of humor injected throughout the story.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Enjoyed it immensly

This story came to life the moment I started reading it, and was completely mesmerized as it unfolded. Please continue. Claire and Vincent are a match made in heaven and I would love to witness this relationship unfold. Delicously sexy. Fantastic dialog, very realistic. I wait with wild anticipation. Yes I do have a fetish for pretty female feet, especially when she understands the kind of power she can command when she uses it to enslave her man. Poor Vincent, he's got it bad. I envy him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Genius!

Fantastic tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

-__- worst story ever.....

NeedsitNeedsitalmost 7 years ago
Fun

A very nice story, well-written, realistic and erotic. Kudos

LisaSmilesLisaSmilesalmost 6 years ago
far out!

I came to read this because it was recommended by Selena Kitt. Right from the start, I wasn't even aware I was reading. I was fully immersed! Brilliant!

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