All Comments on 'Afternoon of Passion'

Loved the Roughness you put into the story

AS usual the action builds, the characters flesh out, everyone gets naked and the fun begins. The excitement level always leaves your reader wanting more. Good one once again. I can see why they call you the Master;-)

An excellent job of conveying intensity and passion in a very short story. Not what I always look for in erotica, but this story definitely gets the job done!