All Comments on 'Afternoon with a Princess'

Very nice, Jack. Everyone should have a woman like that sometime. And every woman should have a man appreciate her as well.

Loved the story and great character development BUT i Could not stand Cecilia at all.

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WHY? she is LOSER. Her rational why she looks for collge age American guys to fuck is all well and good but extremely shallow

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she says

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<i> "My whole life, I've lived on the terms of others," she continued. </i>

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she STILL is

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<i> "I went to Radcliffe to please my mother, because that was her school. I married Frederick to please my father, because Rick's dad was a business associate. I thought running off with Jacques would liberate me somehow, but he's just another man calling the shots in my life. My relationship with him is defined on his terms, at his behest. I see him when he wants me, not when I want him. In the meantime, I've turned my back on my family; they've disowned me. I still have a few friends in the States that I stay in touch with, but I haven't seen any of them since I left. I have a fair number of acquaintances over here, but that's all they are -- acquaintances. They're all friends of Jacques. I'm 29 years-old, I've never really been in love, never really had a man that truly cared for me, for my sake, rather than for his benefit. I just ... feel like I've hit a dead-end. So I pick up American college guys to remind me of the time when I didn't have any cares in the world, when my life was mine to be lived, not somebody else's. Does that make any sense?" </i>

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NO it does NOT. She is fucking other guys to piss off Jacques... which is a decision she made to begin with. If she Truly does NOT want to live her life on someone elses terms why was she STILL with Jacques? and why is fucking around just to get back at Jacques?

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His lack of attention is pissing her off... but she doesnt solve the problem .... her entire reaction is based on what Jacques is doing NOT on what she should be doing.

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SAM GRANT America's greatest General once said

<i>" never fight a fight on someone's terms on someone's else alnd on someone's else battlefield. You will lose every time." </i>

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GREAT STORY

in the background of my mind, "As time goes by".

You have written a very engrossing story of youth and Paris, it’s like a movie. I have a friend Jerry who also met an American girl in Germany in the 70’s who was there too support her French boyfriend. He turned out to be a real lout and treated his so called goddess as a piece of shit as soon as she joined him in Germany. My friend caught her crying and made away with her to the States a month later. They are two of my best friends and their love story was as hot as your prose made us feel for Cecilia and Reese in their encounter. I will be sure I give them a copy of this story tonight. They by the way are in their 50’s and have four great kids and a love that when you see them, shows how deep it is by just viewing them together.<p>Great writing and you did put the whole story in my minds eye as I saw all that transpired. That is a great story when you get me that involved. Thank you for all the wonderful effort.<p>PT

Excellent dialogue and erotic story. Well done!

I liked this story. Why? It had a storyline. It had character development. It was sexy. But I think there is room for improvement. I'll probably be slightly hypocritical here, because I worry about writing about perfect women in my own stories, but I always find it slightly corny to have a 'perfect' woman in a story. Why not focus on a small part of her body that is slightly flawed or a part of her personality that goes against the grain? It's a tricky line, because at the same time as making a character attractive you don't want to make them ugly or repulsive and risk losing your reader. But at the same time, it makes your character seem more human.

The erotic scenes were fine and well described. Though maybe you could make them last a bit longer? Once again a fine line however.

I did enjoy this story, and I look forward to seeing some more in the future!

One of the most insightful looks inside a person on Literotica. She may be a princess or a Queen, but her pain shows and her heart's desires. The way Reese pulled her innermost feelings to the forefront showed empathy and compassion not normally found in a man under forty. Beautifully written and very captivating!

A very sexy and enjoyable story.

What thejohnstermonster said. I loved the honesty in the dialogue..

Cecilia was a slut! She was not marriage material. I have seen many women over my lifetime like her. They marry then go of with a new man. They are never satisfied with having just one partner. “They have to find themselves” but they never do. Sometimes I feel sorry for them, other times I pity them and once in a while I just hate their life style. They are just selfish with no real feelings for others. Their needs are the most important thing in their own life!

I think her meeting Reese is what sets her straight (though not necessarily in a few days). He’s the reminder of what a classic loving relationship might be like, and there are guys like that about (take me for instance). I think he is the catalyst of her change.