by MiliktheRed
This was one HOT story!! It was excellently written. The descriptions and buildup made it incredible! I really hope you add another chapter. I would love to see where he shows up to take her again. Again, excellent story! Keep up the great work.
This story really got to me!, Suspensful and hot! I hope there is more comming!
So many things that I loved about this story. You use words in ways that I've never seen before but it still makes sense! Wonderful as usual! 5 stars every time!
Hey Milik,
Once again a great piece of writing. Can't wait to see more from you.
Erotic and hot. A personal favorite I'll definitely share as of 6/10/13! I look forward to reading more of you!
This is not my normal story interest but in reading your profile I saw this story listed, so I read it. You did a very good job setting up your story characters and peeking my interest as a reader to finish the story.
Thank you for sharing....
RecHiker
So erotic the story made me so horny i was rubbing my clit and came faster than ive cum before
Hey! just want you to know someone had plagiarized your story at Fanfiction.net. He/She had change a few things but mostly same.
User: podlepoof
FfnId : 5883653
Title: my fantasy
This is one of the best stories I've seen here. Great plot and character development. Please keep writing!