by JasonClearwater
I like how you brought the Dane story full circle. In my opinion, this is one of your most powerful stories to date. No one can complain that it lacks emotion and romance. In this sequel, Ken becomes so real that he leaps from the page, straight into the reader's heart.
As always, your characters are multi-dimensional, and peeling away the layers is half the fun of reading a JasonClearwater story. You're a fountain of fresh ideas and youthful enthusiasm that bring a feel of spring-time to an otherwise colourless and dreary day. Two thumbs up!
Complicated, emotional hotness. Never go gentle into that good night, boi...
So glad you did this sequel, the other was too “open” at the end. Great ending. Can’t imagine how any two people could work through such an idea of having a dead person’s memories in their head. Thank you.
Hmmm, there really are a lot of typos in this. Apologies, folks, I like to be tidier than that. I'll do an edit soon and tidy it up. In the meantime, thanks for reading, and overlooking the typos.
i loved this and im happy it wasnt too much of a cliff hanger at the end.
Okay, I’m a fucking sucker for emotional stories and this was worth reading -well worth it🌹Kant👠👠👠
I'd have gave it 5 stars, if allowed. I enjoyed it, left me with nice feeling which is what I needed tonight, Thanks as always
Thanks for the supportive feedback all. Very much appreciated.
The part where Adams was listening to the voice message destroyed me. Signs of a great writer that can manipulate readers emotions. But I still really miss Kian.