All Comments on 'Against The Odds Pt. 01'

This story is so unbelievable that it's believable. Well written, great detail in every scene, superb internal and external dialogue, incredible, and an excellent love story. I could go on and on, but I'll allow others to write a great deal about your story and writing. I intend to read your other stories and become a follower. You have a super talent and are an extraordinary storyteller. Keep up the good work.

What made you think this was a romance? Seemed like the antithesis of a romance to me.

Mitchawa: Thank you so much for the words of encouragement and support.

Great story well written and cant wait for more

Great job

Wonderful story, please write more chapters. They haven't had adorable kids yet. With her drive and attitude, she'd be like a mama bear if anyone hurt her KIDS...or HUSBAND

Very good story, and it definitely needs another chapter. Interesting in that I never thought of falling in love with a porn actress. But I think the author has written a very good and plausible possibility and I hope to see more of their story.

Dee

SBS does not use normal radio equipment. In Afganistan it would be in most cases communication via satellite.

But a firefight in the same valley would be heard 2 miles away. They would report it immediately. Their command would investigate whats going on and give them allowance to act or an order to act or deny any action. In SBS the order is more likely.