by Egmont Grigor
That was a nice story that you wrote. It would be nice to see you continue to write this story since you left things that can be developed into future chapters. Especially about Carson and his daughter, Carson and Ella and the development of the Company. I hope you write another chapter.
That was a very good story you wrote but I was expecting there to be more to the story and instead I found The End. I would love to see the story continued.
Most amusing bit of writing, a good bit done tongue in cheek! Enjoyed the cynical humour spilling into the dialogue. 5*****s.