by nosebone
i enjoyed the kasey/shana "interplay". it will be interesting to see where you go with that. 5 stars!!
I'm really enjoying the storyline, can't wait for more.
I found this story today, I’m so happy I did! Thank you!
You are on a roll, bone! What a story! Please don’t make us wait another year for another chapter. And don’t be in a hurry to end it! This could turn into a wonderful series.
Great writing. Not wanting to lead the author but I could live with a “happily ever after” rather than a gut wrenching “accident” or breakup.
Greeaaat story! Only one editorial comment about calling yourself the "team masseuse" at the gym with Shana. "Masseuse" is for females, "masseur" is for males. You are a great writer; good both at description and dialog. Dialog is hard to do, and your stories really have it down. Nice.
Absolutely loving this story! Can't wait to read the next chapter:) :)
This is a great series so far. I hope there are many more chapters leading up to a happy ending.
Loving this story line so please keep it going
So this is a great story no doubt about it. However with some 5 year delays between chapters in other Nosebone stories I’m worried this could go the same way.
Now these are free for us to read so putting demands on a generous author is a bit men. But, there is always a but, I would really like to read the end of this tale. How do I find this story in the years to come? Will I even remember it? It’s like watching a show like Friends but just getting one single episode every year or so.
It’s my fault though. Nosebone seems to put the word “Final” in the title of the last chapter of all his stories so you know it’s done. This series was short at 3 chapters and didn’t have final listed. I should have waited. However his other stuff was so good, they weee real stories that had good sex in them and weren’t just smut like “I banged the fucking bitch whore till I knocked the back out of her and she should be thankful I bothered.” Yeah that’s not sexy but disturbing.
So my advice is I’ve given 5 stars on the understanding this will be completed and also stay away till it is done.
This is a really great story! The characters are great. I’m waiting anxiously for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing with us.
Take a drink every time you read "she smiled". You will die of alcohol poisoning