All Comments on 'Aged Wine'

size, proportions, characters?

Just because she called him a motherfucker doesn't make this an incest story. Wrong category, dude. This should have been submitted under the Mature category. If the daughter came home, found them and joined them, then it would have qualified for the Incest category.

It might not be incest but don't for get this category also includes taboo.

There is more to this story than just this little seduction.

Don't worry too much about the reviewers. Since this seems to be your first work here, I'm sure further plot development may involve the daughter at some point. I hope you consider more parts. This could be a good story.

The only thing agree with is size. I know some men are well endowed but twelve inches is a bit much to me. An average length and girth would be fine.

All we need now is more background for the characters. Where's the husband? She's studying but is she really? Flesh out the characters and the story will write itself.

Uh, aren't YOU a reviewer? By your own statement, the writer shouldn’t worry about your comments.

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Ya know, it’s one thing to say you disagree with others, it’s another to basically say ignore anyone who dares have a different opinion from yours.

Incest and taboo so the category chosen is the right one. I liked it. ***

So when you shot your load was it so hard and much,was it like a cow pissing on a rock? What lucky bastard you got to fuck a cougar!!

Dave won't have to worry about moving, because he will be in one bedroom or another for the rest of his life it looks like.

Here we go again. Another idiot who is displaying his total insecurity about himself by pretending to be hung like a horse. GROW UP!!!!!!!!! It's ok to tell us about the little 4 incher you actually possess. It would be more believable than that crap you wrote about yourself here.

Hey! Whats wrong with a four incher?

You need enough of them to make up for the eight inchers.

Great start but want know what happens next

Waiting for part 2,

I just want to be loved