All Comments on 'Akkad Burns'

proofread.

interesting story nonetheless

Very, very good story! Imaginative and intriguing!

Stunning!

Well Done. Good story. An adult version of "Where the Wild Things Are." Shades of "The Alchemist" mixed in as well. Would make a great TV series.

Apparently a dictionary is not one of those tools...

This story tries very hard to seem meaningful and powerful, and it really misses the mark. I don't have anything nice to say, so I'll leave it at that.

Fucking marvelous. Deliciously gnostic. A great story.

Thanks all.

@Frivolous. Thanks, much of my writings is influenced from research on Lilith, which invariably leads to Sumeria and gnostic works.

This is one of the best of your stories I've read so far. It ties in so many characters and threads from your other stories, and uses the scaffolding of history and religion/myth to tell a new, plausible origin myth for 'real life' succubi. Great work!

Incredibly awe-inspired by this profound tome of lust that inspires one to sing praises to your unmatched prose and intriguing philosophy. Thank you for sharing these sensual scriptures with us and I pray someday to meet Silil in some paradise.

I rather enjoyed this tale of beautiful carnality. It was dark in places, and dripping with perversity. I enjoyed the tale that pulled us along instead of just a collection of porn. It certainly seems like you did quite a bit of research as well.

I do think perhaps less reliance on certain repeated words might have done well, but it did not hamper my personal enjoyment much.

It was a good take on Lilith, and her handmaidens.

What an incredible story, one of the best I have ever read. I am stunned at how well written and entertaining this was.

Now for the rest of your works..

❤️

Al

Praise Lilake.

These stories are, indeed, arousing beyond words.