All Comments on 'Alana's Son'

The change between first and third person is not well done at times, with the sections not separated. Because of that the story sometimes gives the impression that it was written in third person and then only partly converted to first person.

One particular poor place:

"I'll do anything thing for you Peter, no matter what darling." She had said this a million times over the years and had meant it every time she told him.

That is in a paragraph where the mother speaks in first person, so it needs to be changed to "I had said this" and "every time I told him".

Golly, I missed the change of the tenses. I guess I was enjoying the story too much.

The added trysts of her previous lover's were good. Not something found in most mom/son stories.

Thanks Don

The perfect woman. The one all men dream of and wish for. The one woman who wants you. Thanks for a great story. Best I have ever read.

I loved it. Very well written, aside from a Whoops or two.

Maybe, but it would be very, very few. Some great touches: 18 year old Peter's a good-looking, well-built boy, but sadly still a shy virgin. He's unsure of himself sexually, even uncertain about that big cock he's grown between his legs. Is it as hard as it should be? He shows it to his mother Alana, has her touch it. Mom nearly gasps out loud. It's the most beautiful cock she's ever seen, big and rock hard and reaching for the sky, the perfect complement to her boy's hunky body. She starts jacking it, meanwhile cupping and cuddling Peter's balls with her other hand. (I love it when a mother gently handles her boy's balls.) Peter's super-aroused, he shoots a huge geyser of sperm all over the place. Alana's never seen any man shoot so much sperm, and her cunt's running like a river. Next day she's feeling guilty as hell and goes to apologize. When they hug, she feels her boy's hard on pressing on her belly, and the guilt disappears. She's got to get that big throbbing beauty up inside her. "I threw my dressing gown off, climbed on the bed and sat down on him, now his cock was where he had come from eighteen years ago." It's Peter's first fuck, so nice that it's his own mother. They cum like crazy, as the boy blows those big balls of his up "where he had come from eighteen years ago." Alana's feeling in control of Peter, he's going to be her boy toy. Not a chance. Next time she comes to him, Peter doesn't say a word. He throws his mother on the bed, tears her clothes off, and just shoves that power tool between his legs right up her cunt. He drills that cunt like a machine, he fucks it inside and out and sideways, he fucks his mother into next week. That's what Alana's always really yearned for, a very fit young male to take charge of her, to use her for his pleasure, and she cums like never before. Peter finally unloads his young balls and blasts his mom a huge twatful of his warm creamy semen. I'm sorry that the don't remain a couple, that he marries Emma. But at least Peter and his mother do get together from time to time for a hot incestuous fuck. A superb story, QW, thank you.

Great story, Thanks!

I read this while at work I. Front of a server rack and my pants and undies are wet from all the pre-cum. 5 stars.

This is by far THE best story I've read on this site,,,and I've read many,,,soo erotic,,soo well written,,,soo real and loving.

5 stars just doesn't do it justice

but good story 5*

Wow, really mind blowing!

Alana not a promiscuous women, two lovers and a homeboy keep ringing her bells she won't mind slamming her doors though. drag a bit but a good story. keep writing.

I liked the story, how Alana came to fall for her Son, and how she gave herself so completely to him. Alana should gave wound up pregnant at least once if not twice by her big cocked Son. Your stories of Mother/Son love are quite good. Have enjoyed reading them.

But I feel the ending was a bit rushed other than that not bad at all..

A very beautiful story about 2 lovers, loving each other in every possible way. Loved it!!