by secretsxywriter
This is great wonderful story that I think catches some of the reality of a relationship -it’s not always smooth sailing. The scenes are so hot! I am interested to see if they can make it work and why would such a younger guy be so mature? There is a story there...
Why no stars the last 2 stories?
I hope they don't break up! I already saw there was a Pt. 10 before I read this. I can't believe I actually thought of not reading this whole story back in the early episodes. I love Emma's raw emotions! This story is so great. I've got to read the next part now even though I should really go to sleep! Sorry I can't give this the million star rating it deserves!
I am up through chapter 9 and I think more than half of them I have been unable ot grant you the five stars that this story deserves. Your ability to turn a clever phrase and capture the differing moments of a relationship are excellent. Emma walking out was a wonderful surprise. She is far more advanced at the lifestyle than Alex.
What might this man actually be studying I wonder? You are very crafty about what is in and left out of your stories until the prior moments.
This trickle of chapters is a pest. You can't be composing this quality of work at the pace they are released so why not the whole story?
Funny how I get attached to Alex too. He is a real nice guy but... Women need affection and subs even more. The switch element is really refreshing because to me that means a balanced psyche. We all have those moments that are uncharacteristic to us and we need to manage them. This pair will need to work on their relationship and that's compelling: The "we are perfect for each other from the get go" stories tend to be boring after a while. Hop on the next chapter.