All Comments on 'Alex and Penelope Ch. 01'

looking forward to the next chapter

Enjoyed the slow build up and easy pace. Do not rush the intimacy too quickly. This story should be all about the chase and not the capture!! Hopefully there will be a new chapter very soon!!!!!!!

good story so far.i wonder how long you have the wife lasting in it.

This is a good beginning. From this point, the story could go seriously south, or it could be high-value wonderful.

bring on the next part

Keep it real.....

You may want to think about conflict between Penelope and the bitch. It is a natural and maybe you could develop the character of the bitch even more. Just sayn'

I like it. You have a good start here. If you keep up the quality you exhibit here, it has the potential of becoming a great yarn. Right now the outcome looks quite predictable, so if you want to throw any curves in, it might be wise to start doing it soon.

Thanks for sharing.

Just another self absorbed shit head who doesn't finish what they started. Don't waste your time starting this as it just ends mid story. If you are not a good enough writer to finish your work, don't bother starting in the first place.

Not sure I get @dshallworth’S comment, but so far enjoying and looking forward to the next chapter. A good read, and building nicely.