All Comments on 'Alex Through The Pornoglass Ch. 04'

You keep fucking the story up....just let it die now...you have an amazing concept and you somehow constantly ruin it....please stop

You and your damn twists! I was looking forward to some more frolicking, who wants the old world?!

Ah well, ignore the haters and keep em comin!

Let him fuck Them too

@SyrustheVirus - - really? You think I'm going to leave it here? Well excuse me for trying to inject just a little suspense and story into a collection of sex scenes!

@Anonymous - - you're right, it's a twist! There's more to come - - three more chapters, in fact! Stay tuned.

and the cliffhanger! Can't wait for Alex and Daphne to team up, kick the man in black's ass, and then fuck each other and Alex's porno parents! Keep it up!

Yet again SirSinn another great chapter and seems that your story is getting more interesting. Nice story twist would like to see where it goes from here whether it is going to be a team up between Daphyne and Alex or another twist.

like the world has assholes. At the very least, if you spout something as negative and inflammatory as, "You keep fucking the story up....just let it die now...you have an amazing concept and you somehow constantly ruin it....please stop" have the common courtesy to back such a statement up with some sort of rationale.

Otherwise, it is not feedback, it is merely petulance and contributes nothing except proving you're a twat. It makes about as much sense as me saying, 'Quit writing Derek's Story, you're not telling it correctly.'

At least I gave a reason for you to stop.

(Note to all:)

I did not post this comment at the wrong story, I posted it here because Syrus have stopped writing Derek's Story and no one is reading it. This way more people are likely to read the comment.

@SirSinn

Love the twists and turns; gives you more chances to write smut!

Things were starting to get a little too perfect. (Not that I'm complaining - I breezed through the last few chapters without taking the time to comment for a reason!) That was just what the series needed.

You should make a chapter with a threesome between Alex, Chelsea and Francesca.

Great twist.

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Whatta TWIST!

Love the Frank Miller Sin City reference:

Sinful City showed stark black and white images all contained within the silhouette of another big titted pornstar.

11/10!!!!!