All Comments on 'Alice's Restaurant: Table for Four'

I read all four parts of the series, and the were all fantastic. I am amazed at your storytelling ability, engrossing characters, meaningful storylines, LOTS of emotion.

I am looking forward to more of your work, and hoping for more based on these characters.

CUDOS!!!

I am making the same comment on all four parts because they all deserve it.

Loved it, I've read all 4 stories, and am looking forward to new ones with the same charecters.

Well written series!

That was an awesome story. If only everybody could get the one they need.

Awesome stories (all four of them)! Hoping that you will write more stories based on these four characters... love it!

Great storyteller and writer

really good story keep it up :):*

Loved it.. I'm continuing to read some of your other stories.Please keep on with the stories...

Should think about doing another story of the couples living next to each other

Loved the story and hope we get to see them again, but who is Alice? The pickpockets name is Alicia

Nemo18, in answer to your question about who Alice is...the title of the story is a tip of the hat to an old song by Arlo Guthrie. Your confusion hilights a problem with pop culture references. Unless you happen to be familiar with the source material for the reference or homage, the whole thing can be confusing.

Dialogue is unrealistic and awkward sometimes. No one says, "You're really quite good at that," after mind blowing sex.

I know you haven't been around since 2011, but I'm just going to say this anyway - I miss your writing! On a petty note, Tammy's not dark-skinned; you said in the previous stories she was light skinned. And Seven was a female in the previous story. More importantly, I hope you're well.

It is truly a wonderful culmination of chapters that you have finally ended this wonderful story! Thank you!

I expected some littering, there was no littering.

While the title may well be an homage to Arlo's song, in the first chapter, the Alpaca, .Evil, states Luigi's Place first became known as Alicia's Place by her fellow denizens of the street, then the moniker transformed into Alice's Restaurant.

It's perfectly reasonable to see the transformation as authentic. We humans both like to make terms/names/phrases our own, and people tend to not pay much attention to detail, or they don't have good memories. I can see fellow pickpockets familiar with Alicia, but not really knowing her, and not being familiar with Luigi's changing Alicia to Alice, and not remembering it is Luigi's Place, not Luigi's Restaurant.

Since the Alpaca has either shuffled off this mortal coil, (got his break), or he decided to join Christ and John Wayne; it's possible all three may well be the same.

We'll likely never know, which is unfortunate. This long-haired vicuna with dreads, and an evil streak, is one hell of a storyteller and I, for one, could do with a new fix.

GeoD