All Comments on 'Alien: Lineage'

Only you could make one of these monsters appealing. Good luck with the contest. Thanks

GadenKerensky made me realize that xenomorph sex can surprisingly be pretty hot, and you didn't disappoint either. The only problem I had with the story was trying to imagine the second jaw as a tongue.

Also, you definitely must have played Alien: Isolation, right? The part with the android searching for him and the voicelines was right out of the game, well written. Actually, the first half entirely was quite similar in feel to the xenomorph movies and the game. This is meant as a compliment btw, I realize it could sound like I'm saying it's not original or something, I just suck at explaining myself. Anyway, if you feel like doing more xenomorph stuff, that would be awesome

[12.11.23]

Excellente!

Writer Ian Edginton did something somewhat similar in the DC Comics/Dark Horse Comics x-over series Batman/Aliens in the second series...wherein the antagonist mixes D.N.A. from Arkham villains with Xenomorph embryos to create chimeras (of various percentages) of Joker, Killer Croc, Mr. Freeze, Poison Ivy, Scarecrow, and Two-Face.

11/10!!!!!

Another excellent story from Snek. Five stars just ain't enough. Good luck!

Happily surprised, good stuff👍

Excellent, she found the right mate, methinks. 💘💓

Brilliant work

FANTASTIC!!! I loved it. Nice follow up story. Snekguy, you never disappoint. Thanks

need sequel

First page hadme gripped. Great story development from confused wakeup to glimmer of hope. Crushing betrayal and abys s of despair right until a very unexpected salvation. Could have done without any xenointercourse and would still be five stars.

Loved the story but wondered why it was in celebrity and fan fiction

Absolutely brilliant. I'd love to see more of these two. A new species... The Engineers would be proud / appalled. :)