All Comments on 'Ali's Art Ch. 04'

This gets better with each chapter! I'm gonna blow a gasket at the next one...

Great build up. Sexual tension is such a turn on. Thanks.

I can not wait for more adventures of Ali & Tom. Your build up is incredible.

Thank you for taking the time to write and continue writing this story.

One of the best on this site wish I could give you a 10 star.. :)

Sammie

I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your Ali series - so far. I can only believe it's going to get even better and better as you develop your characters,, and we experience more and more adventures with them.

When I finish each chapter, I click on the fifth star, but there needs to be higher numbers.

Thank you.

Not Porn but super HOT eroticism. Excellent work.

This is a richly satisfying series. And this is the best part so far. You so patiently draw the cousins ever closer and then open their anatomies is such a thrillingly erotic way. Thanks, and keep up the good work.

we're treated to teases and licks and nibbles, but the story does not move forward. i have read the blurbs for each chapter, and i know they get to bump uglies in the end. chapter 1,2, and 4 are redundant.

Perfect pacing, and great character unfolding.

Just keeps getting better and better. Great characters. Excellent work.