All Comments on 'Ali's Art Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
logical fallacy

Previously u wrote that while watching the porn movie with Tom, Heather said that Dave must have thought she wouldn't like anal and never asked and she would have said yes if he had asked. yet in this chapter it is being said that Dave used to fucked her and cum in her ass whenever she asked. apart from that great story so far... loving it!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too Late, Tom

I enjoyed hearing it from Ali's side, particularly her feelings for Tom. I was disappointed that Tom didn't get to take Ali's anal virginity, though. Losing it to a dildo when they've teased each other for this long seems anticlimactic.

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Thanks to everyone who has read my stories, and for all the comments both good and bad. The good I will obviously believe completely, the bad I will try and take on board and improve. If you've not read any of my stories before you'll find they follow a few standard tropes. ...

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