All Comments on 'Ali's Art Ch. 12'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

Great story but you are killing me

This series is one of the best but you are killing me , 1st reading at work, boss is getting kinda suspious(sp) but I am aditicted and can't stop.

2nd the teasing between Ali & Tom..I know that is the bases of your story so just joking - Loved the Crystal part but hope you bring Tom & Ali back with enhanced ground rules... They have to have sex..

I can't take it :) Think Mom-Heather upon return from her honeymoon may have to make a visit to NYC to see her son and Ali.. Help bring them together hee hee

Anonymousover 9 years ago

Best story ever...

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