All Comments on 'Alisa and Mark, a Romance'

This is sooo crazy. Reminded me of a relationship I had. Damn hot. Super hot. Some may think this is unreal but it's really possible. Good story. Loved it!!

Super hot. Loved it, and the rest of your stories I've read. Keep writing - you make me want to be this wet cum slut

This is one very smoking HOT story.

Steve

Just super erotic story, kept me glued from start to finish, brought the slut out in me.

Sorry, you need a proof reader.

I could not get through the first page with all the errors and duplication's.

Your writing is really great! Its hot and exciting, The descriptions are spot on and you had me hard the whole time. Good job.

One of the very best I've read on LE.

Sincere thanks.

Fucking lowlife! 1* of course !

Well written, erotic, tasteful. You did good.

One of the BEST stories that I have read. Thank you

I really don't understand what ticked off the f-ing *troll* who hangs around sniping at you. He/she obviously couldn't string two coherent sentences together. Evaluation by a shrink would probably find deep-seated feelings of impotence and failure underlie the fits of lashing out in anger. Sad (really). I suggest you offer a refund plus a free URL to go look at. :-)

"Sorry, you need a proof reader.

I could not get through the first page with all the errors and duplication's."

...

Says the person who thinks you can form a plural with apostrophe-'s'.

Great story — one of your best. Please ignore the occasional haters and keep it up.

Slutty (sloppy) writing but I loved the totally hot story.

Another great story, who cares about a little grammatical faux pas.I just love the hot sexy stories. Keep it up, you're keeping me up.

Another sexy well written story I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Couldn't get past the first paragraph, do you not proof read at least?

5 Stars. Fun and erotic read.

Sloppy editing suggests you are in too much of a hurry to submit your stories to take the time to proofread carefully, or better, to have someone else edit for you to pick up the grammatical and style problems as well as the typos. Your good stories could and should be great. Trust your loyal readers to be willing to wait an extra couple days.

You needed to put up more stars.

Somewhere between 12 and 15 , maybe?

This is my all time favorite story on Literotica.

(Bandit is #2)

Going to share with my wife. Maybe she'll get some confidence and ideas from your vivid writing style.

What an outstanding story! Great dramatic tension. Incredibly erotic! Thanks for writing it.

Excellent representation of a slut mind and behavior.

This well-written story is a romance story, and really belongs in that genre. However, this in no way diminishes the fact that it is also a great story, with wonderful character development and a plot that holds the attention of the reader throughout. The love scenes are well done, but rather too short; however, they are woven into the plot with great skill by the author. Love stories like this are all too rare, and are a delight to read when discovered.

Holy Mother of Pearl. My wife and I were (still am, but we are in our late 70's and a bit or--- a lot slower) "sluts". But this story takes the cake. If you have lived even a part of this type of love affair, God bless you.

This is the first story I've read of yours and I really enjoy it. The story was well written and with great action passages and plot development. Hope you decide to write a sequel and develop the characters further and see where the story takes them and us.

Wonderfull sexy storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Hot story but their relationship was just about sex, no real meat to the story. Meh.

Bill S.

Great story! You have an amazing writing style. The story flows naturally, very erotic and I loved the details. This definitely held my attention. This is the first story that I have read of yours but I will definitely be reading more. Thank you for sharing your writing abilities with us in Lit. You are extremely talented writer!

Not sure if I ever read anything more erotic. Special.

wonderful story

A great "fuck story" with a sweet ending and clever writing. Really enjoyed it.

Sweet, tender, moving, Alisa and Marks is a beautifully written love story. The characters really come alive to the reader, and the plot moves at a steady pace from start to finish. This is romance storytelling at its finest. Five stars.

Wow ! Hot af !

Really, one of your best.

Such a masterpiece of erotic story telling. 5stars is not gonna do this one justice.

Not romance!!

SHE WAS JUST HIS CHEAP SLUT ON PUBLIC DISPLAY!!

NOTHING ROMANTIC HERE

I struggled with what seemed like forced sex, but appreciate how you brought it back around.

sexual chemistry not romance!

Wow I really wanted to give you 5stars but please although you seem to have great imagination you’ve made mistake after mistake I really wish you writers will reread your stories correct your mistakes before posting them would make them lot easier to read

It is good enough that I reread it every few months.

You write the sexy woman who honours and unleashes her inner slut so well. Every man would be thrilled with such a wanton insatiable woman. You write sex so brilliant and descriptively. It fires my imagination and makes me think of how fascinating a person you'd be to meet. Keep up the good work.