All Comments on 'All Ashore Ch. 01'

by Evil Alpaca

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep going

Looking forward to more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Initiation of Tara

Excellent erotic story! The initiation of a "farm girl" into the world of carnal pleasure was well written.

Some good insight into lfe of the staff of the cruise ship and the fun to be had by many.

Look forward to next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Uhhhhhh...wait.....shit......

.....somehow this ending didn't do it! But the damn story was fucking hot! Thank you for such a well written story...don't see how you can improve on anything. I think I'll save the others for slow times...It' your universe.and I'm just a Peeping Tom walking thru it! Fucking wild!

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