by TwistedManc
Thanks for the story. You left the question mark over Chloe why she was shy at the end, I was hoping for an answer. I thought she was more deeply attached to them and the story would finish as a throuple. We never found out who took Andy’s virginity and I expected that to be his mother. But I guess we’ll never know unless there a new story. 👍
As you say in your intro, the story pretty much has every type of heterosexual, homosexual, bisexual, transsexual and incestuous combination possible. Incredibly hot!
Absolutely fantastic story. I spent all Sunday afternoon reading this story with my cock in my hand. And at the end I think I came harder than I have in a long time. Can’t wait for more.
Dr beulahthemick; Well, that overed just about every sexual permutation there is, brilliant, just wish I could find a hotel/resort like this, only problem, it took me a whole day to read it.
A very good story . I wonder if there is such a hotel ? My step sister could have been Jenny but it never took place . So much for the 60’s .
What a great story. Loved it l.
Always looking out for new stories from you! Looking forward to the twisted gang next installment now. Keep it up mate
Fabulous story. It covered just about every sexual activity except for BDSM, and was incredibly erotic. Andy and Jenny were well drawn and their budding romance was very engaging. The buildup to the sex was extremely erotic. I missed the tension that make Joanne’s Fall even better, but will add a comment to that story. Keep writing!
Insanely good… reminded me of one Spector Duggan’s 8 parters. Really encapsulating
We'v read it 3 time's at time's we had to reread part's the 1st time of reading my partner said he wonderd what happen in that coming year.
thank you for this glorous story, long and erotic.. who could ask for more. 5 stars
Can I give this more stars than 5? This might be the hottest story I have ever read in here. So well written. Just wow...and thank you.
Not sure why the rating is low, this is one of the best stories you've penned and honestly deserves a higher rating than the one at the moment. Yes the story is long however it is also broken up into manageable chunks. Some minor editing needed in places but didn't detract from the 5 star rating I gave it.
Thanks for sharing.
Question to BiAus83, what do you mean, Rating is Low? It is 4.6! It is 1 - 5 rating, not to 1-100!
Someone said it was way too long. I disagree. I've been reading stories here for somewhere near 10 years now and I've never, ever, ever wanted a story to go on more than I did this one. This is hands down the best story ever written and I want another 19 pages!
I've never commented on a post before in 5+ years here. This was hands down the best story i've ever read here and I want another 100 pages. Great job.
Brilliantly written story a part 2 is definitely needed where the twins meet up with their family and all of them find out about each other. Glad you did it as a 19 page one story rather than multiple stories that you have to go in and out of.
It would have been so much hotter if Jenny had forgotten or misplaced her birth control pills when packing.
Amazing story. Loved all the various sexual escapades the twins had. Soon they would add experience with their parents and other family members as well. 5 stars!!!
OMG!
What a hot story. Part two where the whole family revisits the venue and the twins get involved with the rest of the family must come soon.
My pussy is soaking wet and I need a dick NOW.
I couldn’t give this enough stars. It turned me on more than every other story I’ve ever read.
As close to perfect as any story I've read on this site. You really have a direct line to my horny.
Your writing is one of the hottest on Literotica! Definite stroke material!!
You covered most of my fetishes, Thank You!
As a half Greek-American who has played with my sister and other family members, I love this story. Where is this hedonistic hotel?
I think this is the only story I've read here that has both str8 and gay sex. Love how Ian opened up Andy's hole, but then I absolutely love stories of a boy's first time getting fucked! Absolutely great story!!!
fucking awesome story, well written. nice to get a follow up story when they get home.
Great story . Had to put it down four times to look after my own needs!!!
Fantastic .. loved it , It covered all varieties of sex and incest . Only took a break to 💦
would love to see them with the rest of their family and having sneaky secret sex back at home.
WOW. I enjoyed the story, each and every character, right on into the epilogue.