All Comments on 'All Girl Family Reunion Ch. 06'

by Fuzzypen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Amazing

This turns me on so much when reading this! Your an amazing writer ;)

mazzmemazzmealmost 9 years ago
Brilliant as usual.

Such a tasty taboo tale of Raw lust laced with an enticing story line. My only suggestion is more description of the girls to aid the reader in visualizing the characters in action. A bit more dialogue would also make that visual happen I suspect.

JackM30ffJackM30ffover 7 years ago
Almost there

Sure hope you're planning a chapter 7 where the mothers get involved.

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