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by endthedream

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Reads like a poem

It just doesn't read like a story for me to enjoy it. Sorry, but I don't like poems.

glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
A suggestion of a story...

I was left with many questions, the way ghost stories often are.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice try, but...

You're trying too hard to paint imagery without coherence--connecting a few dots does not always make a whole picture.

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