All Comments on 'All In'

Omg this is so hot.... Love ur writing, great job... Need more

this only goes to show you the power of friendship

Absolutely wonderful. I loved it.

great story, really enjoyed it. Nice to know there are happy endings sometimes.

Well written and love is in bloom! Thank you!

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Thank you so much everyone for all the positive feedback. This was a labor of love for me, and I'm so happy that so many of you enjoyed Sarah and Ami's story. Your feedback makes all the difference in the world and I look forward to hearing from you.

Well paced story!

Sincerely this played out like my life with my wife. Probably not want the target audience want to know. But this story evoked all the same family issues. Including the kids.

Sorry guys.

You're rili talented great character build up...and the storylines amazing... Hope to see something else from u soon..

Love the story. The ending was cute and funny. Msound1, I like how you build characters and "talk" about an all too common challenge amongst women who love their best friends or a straight woman who doesn't share the same affection or desire. It can be a painful experience to see both sides not live and be fully loved. I am so glad this wasn't the case here. Maybe the life experience here is hope and happiness is alive and well. Speaking of which, I Hope to read more or your work msound1, in the future

The speech sarah gave to ami reminded me of the speech in faking it when amy said how she felt to karma at her parents wedding. Just wanted to put that out there.

Gosh! What a beautiful love story. Absolutely loved it.

I want to thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful story. I so enjoyed every moment. I love when characters feel real and are brought to life. I wanted it to never end I loved it so much!

Wow, just fantastic. You are a really good writer! thank you for sharing this with us!

This was fucking amazing. Quite possibly the best erotic story I've ever read.

Well written. Best friends falling for each other. Happy ending. What's not to like?

I totally loved the focus on the girls' feelings and relationship, leaving sex as kind of secondary. I have to admit that it's not what I expected to find, but was a very pleasant surprise.

I think I'm going to read more of your stories. Great work!

This worked for me.

I can appreciate the emphasis on PTSD and former military career, even though it was only touched on; you do need to know who your friends are if you are going to get through it relatively painlessly. I also liked that the girls were more multicultural than in other stories; I would like to think that took guts, but it might be something this author does frequently – I have not investigated yet.

There were signs of rushing through the story – letters missed off words, the occasional word missed out altogether, that sort of thing, although the grammar appeared intact. But it was a nice piece that worked without going overboard.

A very beautiful, well written erotic story!

This is truly what every heart calls out for. Another heart that not only beats in rhythm beside it but strengths it with every moment. Love born of true companionship is indeed pure love.

Wonderful, loving story. Two people finding that one who makes them whole.

Nice story. A little rushed and under-written, but very touching.

Cute.

Best love story I've read in a long time.

Beautiful story. I loved it; it made me tear up. Sarah and Ami out here living the dream. I think you did a good job especially with the dialogue which seemed natural for the characters being so familiar with each other.

Sweet, sad, funny, charming…this story was pleasant surprise. I noticed it was posted in Lesbian Sex—a category I never read—only after reaching the middle. It was so well thought out and written, I had to follow it to the end.

The relationships felt so real. I was upset for Ami that Paul could not bring himself to supporting her and becoming a father. I felt sad for Paul that he lost the woman he loved to a life path his soul knew he could not walk. Fortunately, two best friends found something wonderful together and had a beautiful family they both wanted and loved.

Thank you for writing this.

sweet story...!

tho never encountered a pussy too hairy to go down on...!