All Comments on 'All in the Family Ch. 02'

Nicely paced, lovely, likeable main characters, the story flows well, and you've placed it well I reckon'. There's not enough real romance around so thank you...

I didn't realize you weren't a man until your closing paragraph. Great job. Just the right balance of hot and sweet.

Very nicely written. Since my wife is of Italian heritage, I could relate to some of the story.

Lisa needed to clean her man, which surprised her sister, and intrigued her at the same time. One confession leads to another and.........

My sister and I are ten and a half months apart. We share in so many things, but most fun is sharing husbands. When I was dating my now husband, I was also dating other guys. I always was home by a certain time because he would come to see me after his late shift was over. We wouldn’t waste any time getting naked and fucking on the sofa. I would be wet from fucking my other dates earlier in the evening, but I would get home in time to receive him. One afternoon I got totally involved in a really hot three way with my professor and his wife. I realized I had to be home in 5 minutes...but I was an hour away. I called my sister, told her my dilemma, and she said she would stall my boyfriend. Now she is the opposite of me...blond, while I have black hair, her tits are 32A while mine are 34D. So when I got home and quietly went in the living room, they were both naked and fucking wildly! I stripped and joined them...and I asked if he was ok being “entertained” while I had to finish some school work in the library? He said he loved the variety...small tits, blond, completely bald cunt. I told him he could have her anytime since we share everything. I married him, took my sister on our honeymoon, and she came to live with us for 3 years till she found a husband. We went on their honeymoon and swapped off for a week. The guys have taken turns impregnating us!

Wishing I could marry into this family. Hot! Erotic! Exciting! Arousing! This male feels you write very well from the male perspective. Five stars. Is there more to come? Wright and Maria? The sisters with cousin Connie? Will Connie feel Wright at home? LOL!

This story was incredible. I love the dynamic of the couple and the family and would love to read more about it. Very sweet, very sexy, and very well written!

Now what if Narda finds a new man is he going to share Lisa with him?

Great job, a very real feel to to people and actions. As far a different point of view, I think you nailed it. I really look forward to further chapters and more sharing!

Your stories are very romantic in addition to being extremely erotic. This is no exception. It takes awhile to build to the climax, but it’s well worth the ride. Please keep writing new stories. Your readers are looking forward to them.

I think you are doing a great job telling the story from a male view. Look forward to seeing more chapters.

You've got a gift with language, storytelling and, it seems, human relationships that suggests even more meaningful stories in the future. I look forward to following your work.

You are the BEST author on this site. Your characters are believable and breathe life into the plot. Very enjoyable reading.

Very erotic for me having only had first time sex with my wife on our honeymoon 50.6 years ago and do not regret it. After a little learning curve, sex was fantastic and not bad at all!

Even better than the first one. Please don't stop writing

Explore more of this story.....great....love to read about skinny dipping said by her mother in law

Althea,

I enjoyed this story and would have loved to be the man in this!

Thanks for a very sexciting story.

Jan

A beautiful story from a pure heart. I hope your break isn't too long as I wish you continue this saga.

A New Fan

Ron

Keeping it in the family

These two sisters are going to wear Wright out, but he's loving every minute of it. What guy wouldn't? More pussy than he can dream of, and they both want it.

Quite a hot story. I enjoyed both chapters and hope there are more.

Would like to see more from this family!

please write more stories about this family

Truly great writing. Thank you.

We both loved this story, very sexy and well written x

I wish I lived in a family like this. Not just the sex, thought it would be pretty fuckin hot, but for the open, non judgmental communication. I guess that's why this is fantasy.

Yes your story was quite realistic in that addressed emotional situations, there are boundaries that can be crossed as if both agree. The sisters already had their, the family theirs, and society, and it should not be imposed by on another. The was story was very satisfying and stimulating

l have been acquainted with a family that similar values and openness, it took a few days to readjust and I found it very exciting. Great story look forward to more and will definitely be reading a lot of your stories.

This was a sweet story that I enjoyed reading. I liked how Wright was so surprised at how sexually open Lisa’s family was and he looking back at the environment he grew up in where there was no outward show of love between his parents. I felt sorry for Narda having been hurt from her sham marriage, being the only family member without someone to love. I’m happy that Lisa found it in her heart to share Wright. It would have been interesting to see what life would have been like for Wright, Lisa and Narda after the honeymoon. I would hope that they would stay together and Wright start a family with both women, and live happily ever after. :-p

Great storytelling and character development. Very, very hot!

Very nice. Would love to see more.

As a man I enjoy your story. Specifically confirming the joy of anal stimulation

The part about doing things behind her back was a bit over the top and almost had me loose interest because of the strong tone, but in the overall two parts I was very pleased

You are an amazing writer. I love the way you get into the cerebral part of sex and attraction. Well done, I can't wait to eat some more of your work