All Comments on 'All in the Family Ch. 07'

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ansdguyansdguyalmost 12 years ago
Very erotic..

I'm not completely sure where this is going. I hope Dania doesn't wind up screwing other men.

ChasBChasBalmost 12 years ago
Cousins

That will, of course, be their cousins who Dania saw going at it in the solarium. And I fear things are going to turn into a fuck-fest, and that is going to be some boring. It's all been done before. Unless there is some entirely new approach for such a story.

DeepBlueCDeepBlueCalmost 12 years ago
Bro & Sis Exhibitionists?

Since they decided to spread the story that they are brother and sister sharing an apartment with their parents supporting the idea.

Now, how do they expect to sustain a sexual relationship with Dania being so voluminously vocal during sex and their plans to become exhibitionists without raising more than a few eyebrows?

Can you spell death wish (figuratively, of course)?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
her dialogue,

too much, like a rant rather than a conversation. work on the pacing more. it just did not feel like the way real people talk.

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