by callmejack
I'm not completely sure where this is going. I hope Dania doesn't wind up screwing other men.
That will, of course, be their cousins who Dania saw going at it in the solarium. And I fear things are going to turn into a fuck-fest, and that is going to be some boring. It's all been done before. Unless there is some entirely new approach for such a story.
Since they decided to spread the story that they are brother and sister sharing an apartment with their parents supporting the idea.
Now, how do they expect to sustain a sexual relationship with Dania being so voluminously vocal during sex and their plans to become exhibitionists without raising more than a few eyebrows?
Can you spell death wish (figuratively, of course)?
too much, like a rant rather than a conversation. work on the pacing more. it just did not feel like the way real people talk.